在托福考試中,托福口語是其中最重要的部分之一,同學們要想取得托福口語的高分,不僅僅需要練習自己口語的流利度,更要準備足夠的托福口語素材以及背誦不同題材的要托福口語真題,本文小編將為同學們帶來托福口語模板及參考范文匯總之更受尊重的職業的內容,希望能夠幫助正在備考托福的同學們!
托福口語題目:
It is generally agreed that the society benefits from the work of its members. Which type of contribution do you think is most valued by your society: primary school teachers, artists or nurses? Why?
托福口語參考范文:
Even though artists and nurses are 【also】 very important, I 【still】 believe primary school teachers are 【most valued】 by our society.
First, because these teachers enjoy 【the highest status】. They have had the largest wage increase these years and are respected by people from【all】walks of life since 【everyone】 needs to send their children to school for education. And people are proud to be a teacher.
Second, the contribution of these teachers cannot be replaced. As we all know, pupils are still 【too young】 to have 【any】 self-discipline and their parents are 【always】 busy with work, having 【no】 time to take care of them. So kids are in 【great】 needs of the supervision and guidance from teachers.
“【】”體現——最受重視的“最”
托福口語參考答案:
Even though artists and nurses are +also very important, I still believe primary school teachers are the most valued by our society.
【觀點】小讓步 + 小學教師最受社會的重視
【論證:加+also,強調在讓步;
語法:most如果修飾的是動詞,表示“最……”,不用加the】
Firstly, because these teachers enjoy a higher status. As we know, the salary salaries of these teachers have been raised these years. And also they are respected by all walks of people people from all walks of life. For example, when they go to some restaurants, hotels or tourist spot spots, they can enjoy a comparatively lower low price.
托福口語模板分析:
【理由1:小學教師的地位比較高】
【從理由句就出現一個問題:沒有體現——“最”,地位不是最高,工資不是最高,只有尊重來自“各行各業”算是體現了“最”。
但是來自各行各業人的尊重也論證不準確:拿到相對較低的交割并不等于被尊重。如果按照這個標準去評價:學生也受到了全社會的尊重,很多大型企業的職員也受到了全社會的尊重——這不過是一種福利,社會給的/企業給的福利。】
那什么原因讓各行各業的人都尊重他們呢?——因為都要送孩子去學校嘛!——因為小學教師的影響力太大呀!受益方太多啊!——你的孩子,或許可能不上高中,上中專;不上大學,上大專;不上研究生,上班——但,你的孩子能連小學都不上嗎?——所以才超重視嘛!
語法:1. salary是可數名詞,故these teachers的工資,應該用復數形式;
2. 并沒有all walks of people這樣的表達,如果想說“來自各行各業的人”,可以說“people from all walks of life”;
3. comparatively的意思是:“相較而言”,故后邊無須再加比較級】
Second, the contribution of these teachers cannot be replaced. As we know, kids are the future of our country. If they are taught very well, they will have a better contribution to our country. And a good teacher will actually change the future of our kids.
【理由2:教師的貢獻無可替代】
【理由句正確,但是論證根本沒有證明這種“不可替代性”。這里說到的內容是:孩子是國家的未來。他們接受了良好的教育,長大才能報效祖國。一個好教師將能夠改變孩子的未來——這并沒有體現不可替代性啊?這只能體現小學教師這個行業的重要性啊!
什么是不可替代性呢?就是:這些事情只能由小學教師來完成,其他人無法替代他們完成。
什么樣的人可能會替代小學教師的工作呢?1. 小學生自己;2. 家長。1不行,因為他們太小,缺乏自律性;2不行,因為他們太忙,沒有時間。
綜上,Pt修改后的最終版:Even though artists and nurses are 【also】 very important, I 【still】 believe primary school teachers are 【most valued】 by our society.
First, because these teachers enjoy 【the highest status】. They have had the largest wage increase these years and are respected by people from【all】walks of life since 【everyone】 needs to send their children to school for education. And people are proud to be a teacher.
Second, the contribution of these teachers cannot be replaced. As we all know, pupils are still 【too young】 to have 【any】 self-discipline and their parents are 【always】 busy with work, having 【no】 time to take care of them. So kids are in 【great】 needs of the supervision and guidance from teachers.
“【】”體現——最受重視的“最”
【幸運的開竅---口語篇】
剛來亦鷗的時候,被高分錄音嚇慘了。一個兩個說得有流利語音語調又那么棒。我之前考雅思口語是7,本來我對自己還小有信心,聽完大家的,突然覺得完了自己口語是不是只能18分了。其實沒那么可怕啦,因為好多人打好草稿會錄好多遍才傳上去,你怎么可能第一次說就有別人說的那么好呢?更何況即使是native speaker剛剛遇到一個陌生的題目只給15s30s時間,也說不了那么順溜,考試的時候怎么可能出現這么完美的答案嘛。(大牛們,我不是故意的><)帶著這樣“邪惡”的想法,你才能夠對自己充滿信心。
Task1-2如果時間夠多,最好還是好好練亦鷗90題,畢竟寂靜是靠不住的。(聽到沒?!快快來刷90題!)(主頁君:不要忘記參加咱們的#曬出你的90題進度#的活動哦!)考前我看寂靜看到11.30,第二天去考試的路上還在組織語言,結果一題都沒中哎><不要投機取巧啊。。。我雖然口語是26,但task12是fair,還是挺可惜的。當時在晨讀的時候沒有好好利用晨讀資源,萬分后悔。
Task3、5問題不大,沒有管,拿GOOD意料之中。Task4、6問題大了去了,考前一周在群里模考的時候我還磕磕絆絆講不好例子呢,但后來為什么拿了GOOD呢?我覺得原因有兩個:一是我花了一整個下午的時間聽了亦鷗的網友微課。我把Miya老師整理的task4微課全部聽了一遍,讓錄音帶著我做題,慢慢就找到感覺了。細節是加分點,不過更重要的是你能不能提煉出professor說的主旨和框架。不要一味說多說多,時間真的不夠。6句話足以解決T4&6!每說一句話就畫一個圈圈,把有用的詞放進來。)第二個突飛猛進的原因是考前三四天的時候練了亦鷗的口語模考,這個必須力薦!你們練了就知道了,只有真實放在考試的環境中多練幾次,考試了才能不慌。
介紹一些值得積累的表達:
1. 【enjoy the highest status】享有最高的社會地位
2. 【people from all walks of life】各行各業的人
3. 【pupils】 “小學生“,不過,你知道這個詞還有一個意思是:“瞳孔”嗎?什么?不知道?提到了直接查網絡詞典的翻譯,他們會告訴你:拓寬眼界=widen one's field of vision 你千萬別以為這是比“broaden one's horizons”更高級的說法。因為:field of vision的意思是:
額……所以,就真的是“眼界”的意思,就是你的瞳孔(pupil)能夠看到的范圍。。。所以這就是查在線翻譯的問題所在啊!它怎么知道你要說的是個比喻義呢???所以,請自己查紙質版字典,不要一味依靠在線翻譯哦!
4. 【too young to have any self-discipline】太小以至于沒有任何自律性。首選,too...to...,是太……以至于不能/沒有……;其次,缺乏自律性,缺乏自控能力,請用have no self-discipline或者lack discipline來表述,請不要用:cannot control themselves!Pt就經常見到有人寫”I cannot control myself“(這基本上就是:I have schizophrenia. I am crazy. 我精神分裂了,我瘋了!)這可不是我缺乏自控能力哦!這意思可是南轅北轍!
5. 【be in great needs of sth.】迫切需要……。大家還可以說be in big(美式英語)/ considerable(英式英語,所以你可以看出美式超實用,英式高B格~)/ strong need of sth. 還可以說There is a great need for sth. 這里的need是名詞,這表達就要比:I really need sth.或者I need sth. badly/ desperately/ urgently. 的說法B格高很多。為什么?因為動詞轉換成了名詞呀~
以上就是小編為同學們帶來的托福口語模板及參考范文匯總之更受尊重的職業全部內容,希望能夠幫助正在備考托福的同學們!