考生在備考獨(dú)立口語(yǔ)時(shí)常會(huì)遇到的一個(gè)問(wèn)題是缺乏專(zhuān)業(yè)靠譜的權(quán)威人士來(lái)為自己批改答案。大家可能練習(xí)了不少獨(dú)立口語(yǔ)話題，但因?yàn)槿狈τ行?，就連自己也不知道練習(xí)到底有沒(méi)有成效。下面小編就來(lái)為大家分享一些來(lái)自托福資深講師針對(duì)獨(dú)立口語(yǔ)高頻話題學(xué)生答案的專(zhuān)業(yè)批改。

本期托福獨(dú)立口語(yǔ)高頻話題

Should all high school students take economic classes?

學(xué)生對(duì)此話題的表述答案

Well, I do think it is quite necessary for our high school students to take some classes about economics. The first reason is our society if full of economic knowledge, like when we are going to buy some daily supplies here in the supermarket or our parents received salary shares every month . If we can not handle the balance between the incomes and expenses, we are going to bancrupt some day. The second reason is, it is quite good for our self-development to know how to use money, to make money. My father have told me there are two things we should learn to handle, the money and the time. Therefore, I do think it is quite a good idea to let all high school students to take economics classes.

資深講師批改意見(jiàn)

語(yǔ)法方面出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤(Grammar)

1 well (delete)

2 The first reason is our————the first reason is that our

3 or our parents————or when our parents

表達(dá)部分存在的問(wèn)題(Expression)

1 economic knowledge————economic influence/factors

2 the incomes————income

3 is, it is quite good————is that it is quite good

4 told me there are————told me that there are

5 the money and the time————money and time

6 quite a good idea to let all high school students————quite a good idea for all high school students

此高頻話題高分口語(yǔ)模板分享

I do think that it is quite necessary for a high school student to take some classes about economics. The first reason is that our society is full of economic influence, like when we go and buy daily supplies in the supermarket or when our parents receive their salary shares every month. If we can't handle the balance between income and expenses, we are going to bankrupt some day. The second reason is that it is good for our self-development to learn how to use money to make money. My father had told me there are two things we should learn how to handle: money and time. Therefore, I think it is a good idea for high school students to take economic classes.

以上就是小編為大家分享的托福獨(dú)立口語(yǔ)高頻話題的學(xué)生解答和資深講師批改分析，希望能為大家?guī)?lái)一些獨(dú)立口語(yǔ)回答方面的幫助。