獨(dú)立寫作有點(diǎn)麻煩,因?yàn)槲矣X得這個(gè)部分拿good不難,但是你要拿滿分的good就難了,獨(dú)立寫作畢竟還是要考一點(diǎn)水平的,所以這部分滿分的good我個(gè)人認(rèn)為沒有綜合部分容易,但是如果你只想拿個(gè)good還是很easy的。其實(shí)到后面我基本已經(jīng)形成了一個(gè)寫作思路,這個(gè)思路就是讓步轉(zhuǎn)折。
結(jié)構(gòu)就是這樣的:
第一段+讓步段+兩個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折段+結(jié)尾,基本就是A比B好,B有一個(gè)好處,可是A有兩個(gè)好處,A的好處點(diǎn)更多,或是A的好處更重大,所以A好,然后總結(jié)一下。
一般都希望大家事先準(zhǔn)備好自己的一套模板,這里的模板我只局限在開頭和結(jié)尾,就好比我到后面基本每次都是同樣的開頭和結(jié)尾,考試的時(shí)候自己稍微改動(dòng)幾個(gè)詞就好了,獨(dú)立寫作部分一開始,我就開始寫,差不多3分鐘時(shí)間就把開頭和結(jié)尾全敲完了,然后我就有更多的時(shí)間寫我的中間段了。宗旨就是最好自己寫,自己改,可以多看看范文之類的,自己總結(jié)一套,之后你就按那個(gè)寫,背熟它,考試的時(shí)候3分鐘瀟瀟灑灑噼里啪啦就將近100個(gè)詞敲上去了,想想都爽。
這是我用的開頭段,因?yàn)槲液竺娑加米尣睫D(zhuǎn)折,所以就用了這個(gè)開頭。
In contemporary society, much ink has been spilled about......(題目改寫),and some claim that... Such assertion, however, is torn to pieces by others. As far as I am concerned, the statement that...(題目改寫)is arbitrary and one-sided because it fails to take all the related circumstances into consideration. We should analyze this statement comprehensively before we draw the eventual conclusion.結(jié)尾段In brief, based on the previous discussion, the issue...(改寫題目)is complex and needs a case by case analysis. We are not supposed to disregard those situations where the statement is unjustifiable. As a result, I cannot totally agree with this statement.
之后就是中間段落怎么寫了,這里我推薦大家多看看考題,將其分分類,想一想一般都有什么理由可以寫,像壓力、經(jīng)濟(jì)等理由是很適用的,你平時(shí)多練練考試的時(shí)候直接套上去就行了。這里給大家看幾個(gè)例子:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to help their communities.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
題型:隱藏絕對詞類
話題:社會(huì)類
分析:隱藏絕對詞類的題目暗含的意思是一類人都應(yīng)該做某事兒。
我們既可以完全同意這個(gè)事兒的2-3個(gè)好處,也可以完全不同意找到其2-3個(gè)比較好展開而且不重復(fù)的壞處,畢竟一個(gè)事兒很難適合所有人,只要我們找到一個(gè)反例,實(shí)際上就可以很好地反駁這個(gè)題目。
思路一:一邊倒同意
1.由于很多大城市的生活成本高到了前所未有程度,現(xiàn)在的年輕人普遍面臨著雙重壓力,因此沒有時(shí)間和精力來幫忙社區(qū)。
First and foremost, with the living costs in most of megalopolises hitting all time high, a large proportion of young urban residents today are exposed to scissor-style pressure, as a result of which rare will be the spare time that is available for making contributions to improving the community. For relevant examples we only need to turn to the experience of my elder brother, a newly graduated college student, majoring in software engineering, working in a leading software company as a development engineer...
2.隨著社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)的出現(xiàn)以及生活節(jié)奏的加快,現(xiàn)在的年輕人跟鄰居熟識(shí)的機(jī)會(huì)越來越少,自然也就不愿意去參與社區(qū)的改善。
On the top of that, there is no point for the young people working in metropolises to help their neighbors if the chance of getting acquainted with them seems quit slim, thanks mainly to the advent of social network applications and also to the increasingly rapid pace of modern life. My elder brother's experience can be cited here again to shed the light on this point.Money is the most important aspect in a job.Material reward is not the only factor to consider while choosing a job, but it is the most appealing, particularly for those seasoned employees, thanks to the ever-increasing living cost in the overwhelming majority of metropolises, to the scissor-style pressure they are exposed to from supporting their aging parents as well as raising children, and above all, to their strong desire of receiving salaries in a reasonable proportion to their years of strenuous work.Helping the community| Voluntary work is not the only factor to consider in their spare time, but it is the most appealing, particularly for those young people from affluent families, thanks mainly to the strong desire to escape the ennui of home and to find identity, and also to the sense of self-fulfillment gained in such kind of activities.
思路二:具體情況具體分析
對于條件比較差的年輕人來說,他們很難找到足夠的時(shí)間來幫助改善社區(qū)因?yàn)樗麄儧]有選擇只能不遺余力的賺更多的錢,甚至以犧牲自己的身體健康為代價(jià)。
With regard to young people in poor and backward areas, hardly could they have enough time to make contributions to the improvement of their communities on account of the fact that they have no options but to pull out all their stops to earn more money even at the cost their health. There are myriads of examples in our lives, one of which is my elder brother, a high school graduate, working as a waiter in a restaurant in Beijing.
然而,對于那些來自經(jīng)濟(jì)比較發(fā)達(dá)地區(qū)的年輕人來說,很容易想象他們中絕大部分人愿意在社區(qū)改善中扮演非常積極的角色。首先,他們更強(qiáng)烈的意識(shí)到和諧社區(qū)的必要性;其次,不斷提高的生活水平使得他們不必成為最基礎(chǔ)的需求擔(dān)心,主要問題或許集中在通過改善社區(qū)獲得新的成就感。
However, when it comes to the youth in economically advanced/vibrant areas, it takes little imagination to think that a majority of them are willing to play an active role in bettering their neighborhoods.Granted, helping the community| Voluntary work is not the only factor to consider in their spare time, but it is the most appealing, particularly for those young people from affluent families, thanks mainly to the strong desire to escape the ennui of home and to find identity, and also to the sense of self-fulfillment gained in such kind of activities. It is much easier for the parents to raise children now than fifty years ago.
To achieve successful development of a country, a government should focus its budgets more on young children education than on higher education?
題型:二元素對比類
話題:教育類
分析:從涉及到主題出發(fā),比如老師、學(xué)生、家長、國家的角度進(jìn)行討論
Today people cannot buy products based on information in their advertisements because advertisements are less honest than before.
題型: 今昔對比類
話題: 商業(yè)類
思路: 一邊倒,但是從公司和個(gè)人兩個(gè)角度進(jìn)行分析
First of all, there is no denying that fewer and fewer companies would like to allure their customers through deceptive ads since the benefits of such kind of market activities pales into insignificance when set against their huge negative impact.Furthermore, at the individual level, with the advent of popularity of the internet, especially the introduction of all kinds of applications, an increasing number of consumers have come to the rude awakening that most of ads are at best informative and at worst misleading.
這里列出的都是body part最開頭的幾句,這里很多給出的理由和解題思路都給你列出來了,試著按他提供的這種自我分析一下。這里面其實(shí)有些句型和短語詞組是考場上很高頻地會(huì)用到的,你不妨就直接拿來背,不斷地套這些句型去寫不同主題的句子。因?yàn)槲椰F(xiàn)在覺得水平不是很高的人如何在托福寫作拿高分?不是真的考場上寫出來的,是靠考場下準(zhǔn)備出來的,是背出來的。像一些你平時(shí)覺得考試會(huì)經(jīng)常用到的短語何不平時(shí)多總結(jié)多練習(xí)呢,考場上用到就直接蹦出來了,還會(huì)糾結(jié)怎么寫比較好嗎?就好比“許多”、“因?yàn)椤边@種的,你肯定會(huì)用,那就平日多總結(jié)。