一般托福寫作能稱為范文的，一般都是因?yàn)樗谇苍~造句，文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)，中心思想等方面都有獨(dú)特的造詣。如何分析一篇好的范文呢，牛學(xué)君就為大家?guī)韺?shí)例分享，要考生明白一份好的范文分析，能夠提高我們自己的寫作能力之外，還能加強(qiáng)邏輯的建設(shè)。首先，我們看一篇文章，第一步就是要數(shù)清段落，然后再根據(jù)每段開的意思，來大概總結(jié)一下段落要點(diǎn)。

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When a new piece of technological device, usually an electronic gadget, is launched, there must be long queues of people who cannot wait to own it. On the other hand, there are patient people, who wait until the market calms down. Although passion is not necessarily undesirable, patience is more adoptable.

這段從一個例子開始訴說一個中心思想，然后最后一句話帶出耐心更需要被采用。典型的開頭見山，例子清晰簡單，而且很有認(rèn)同感，讓讀者想起iPhone的發(fā)布。

For one thing, if a consumer could stay calm, he or she would likely have an economical deal or even a bargain. As consumer electronics are updated so frequently that the original high price of a model can hardly remain long, it is not smart to purchase a device when it is newly available and at its peak price. After the initial thrill, many early birds regret their impulse because they know that they have overpaid. It is therefore sensible to buy the device when the price drops to a reasonable level. As for the excitement of owning a new digital gear, as long as the device is new to its owner, it does not have to be the freshly available.

Here comes the follow-up question: for how long should a consumer wait? Usually a few months — when many people have owned it. A typical example is smart phones, whose old models are replaced with new ones annually. A consumer could wait for merely a few months and own the most recent model with a moderate expense of money, saving hundreds of dollars.

上面的例子的詳細(xì)介紹，通過問答形式開頭，能夠吸引考官注意，代入感很強(qiáng)，讓考官有興趣去繼續(xù)閱讀。

中心句：Waiting is a rational decision also because consumers can be better-informed. Although it is exciting to chase the trend closely, those technological fashionistas can wind up feeling disappointed. When they purchase a newest model of tablet or a most cutting-edgy wearable item, they often have no idea or only a vague idea of how these products actually feel—the appearance, the tactility, the weight and the functionality. At the moment they open the box, any feature that is below their expectations can upset them. Contrarily, patience makes winners. It is particularly advantageous that ‘late arrivals’, who have probably learned the strengths and weaknesses of a device from the feedback of ‘early birds’, are well prepared for the item. Especially unsurprising by the drawbacks, those patient shoppers are less likely to be ripped off .

中心句依舊使用例子證明自己的觀點(diǎn)，通過人們的購買習(xí)慣來證明消費(fèi)者更具備耐心。承接下面的總結(jié)，不會一下子把思想講完，以為是結(jié)束了。

In conclusion, first, if a technological product is purchased at a supposedly lower price, it is more worth the money; second, if the decision of purchasing is based on others’ user experience as reference, it may be more reasonable. For these two reasons as the minimum, it is better to buy a technological device when the initial heat is gone than when the tide is high.

句法結(jié)構(gòu)豐富且自然：沒有過度堆砌語法結(jié)構(gòu)而造成閱讀困難、冗余、油膩，作為范文可以幫助學(xué)生建立正確的導(dǎo)向，防止一味追求復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。詞匯地道且自然：并沒有追求長難罕見詞，但大量使用了學(xué)生普遍認(rèn)識但未必會用的詞匯，恰如其分，沒有明顯的中文痕跡。

以上就是牛學(xué)君整理的如何學(xué)習(xí)一篇范文的方法，我們不僅要學(xué)習(xí)范文的詞匯使用，更需要了解作者是如何使用技巧激發(fā)考官閱讀興趣，增強(qiáng)文章的可讀性。正在備戰(zhàn)托福的考生，需要注意方法技巧的使用，來幫助托福寫作的提升，不能死記硬背。祝愿考生八月，九月有一個好的托福成績。