如今越來越講究用戶體驗(yàn)，在托福寫作中其實(shí)也是一樣。一篇文章哪怕再有內(nèi)容，如果在行文方面存在影響閱讀和理解的問題，同樣很難得到高分。那么托福寫作中考生如何提升考官的閱讀體驗(yàn)?zāi)兀肯旅嫘【幘蜑榇蠹抑亟榻B兩個(gè)提升方向。

托福作文詞匯應(yīng)選擇使用不空洞的詞

1.一些空洞的單詞或詞組根本不能為句子帶來任何相關(guān)的或重要的信息，完全可以被刪掉。比如下面的句子：

When all things are considered，young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents，in my opinion.

這句話當(dāng)中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都顯得多余。完全可以去掉。改為：

Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

2.有些空洞和繁瑣的表達(dá)方式可以進(jìn)行替換，例如：

Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.

“due to the fact that”就是一個(gè)很典型的繁瑣的表達(dá)方式的例子，可以替換，簡(jiǎn)化為下面的表達(dá)方式：

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have now.

托福寫作中應(yīng)盡量減少重復(fù)啰嗦

1.盡量避免重復(fù)使用同樣的詞匯。或者有的時(shí)候雖然詞匯沒有重復(fù)，但意思卻有重復(fù)。這時(shí)候可以做一些簡(jiǎn)化的工作。例如下面這個(gè)例子：

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.

large 對(duì)一個(gè)farm來說就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改為：

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.

更簡(jiǎn)潔的表達(dá)方式為：

My grandfather grew up on a large farm.

2.有時(shí)一個(gè)詞組可以用一個(gè)更簡(jiǎn)單的單詞來替換，例如：

My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents’ farm.

這里的over and over again就可以改為repeatedly，顯得更為簡(jiǎn)潔：

My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents’ farm.

只要大家能夠做到以上這兩點(diǎn)，小編相信各位同學(xué)的托福作文一定能給考官帶來更好的閱讀體驗(yàn)，作文得分自然也就愛水漲船高咯。