在托福考試中,托福口語是其中最重要的部分之一,同學們要想取得托福口語的高分,不僅僅需要練習自己口語的流利度,更要準備足夠的托福口語素材以及背誦不同題材的要托福口語真題,本文小編將為同學們帶來托福口語模板及參考范文匯總之18歲成人投出選票的內容,希望能夠幫助正在備考托福的同學們!
托福口語題目:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 18-year-old adults are not mature enough to vote.
托福口語參考范文:
In my opinion, 18-year-old people already have the ability to vote. Firstly, because I think when we are 18, we are adults, which means we can take responsibility for our behaviors and actions. (At the age of 18, we begin to make decisions independently, and thus our votes can represent our own opinions)【括號內的也可以不說】 And also I think young people above 18 are very concerned about the future of the country and they have the ability to reason and also enough knowledge about politics, which will help them to make right decisions. 補充例子:For example, my friends and I are just 18 years old, and we often surf online to learn about the information related to national policies. And our politics teachers always tell us not to just repeat what others say but think by ourselves. So we are mature enough to vote.
托福口語參考答案:
Well, I don't think I can agree with statement because I think +people who are already 18 years old are mature enough to vote.【也可以直接說: In my opinion, 18-year-old people already have the ability to vote.】
Firstly, because I think when we are 18, we are adults, which means we can take responsibility for the our behaviors and actions. (At the age of 18, we begin to make decisions independently, and thus our votes can represent our own opinions)【補充了一些細節,否則,這第一個理由根本就沒有論證,丟下一句:我18,我成年了,就走了……哎~不要這么傲嬌嘛!至少稍微結合咱們的話題解釋一句嘛!】
And also I think young people above 18 are very concerned about the future of the country and they have the ability to reason and also enough knowledge about politics, which will help them to make right decisions.
補充例子(可以跟著Pt的答案一路說到結尾):For example, my friends and I are just 18 years old, and we often surf online to learn about hte information related to national policies. And our politics teachers always tell me, "Please don't just repeat what others say but think by yourself, think critically." So I am pretty sure that we are mature enough to vote. (/ 語速快的同學,可以挑戰加長版結尾So I am pretty sure that we have the capability to decide what is good for the nation and the people and thus we definitely are old enough to vote. )
這純粹為了湊時間的結尾,可以不讀了:So I think they have both the right and capability to decide what is good for the nations and what is good for the people. So that's why I think they are old enough and mature enough to vote.【很啰嗦,其實就是因為沒有內容了,所以用漫長的結尾來拖時間】
托福口語模板分析:
本文來自高分網友shurui,非常贊的發音!這一次之所以沒有選擇晨讀團同學的錄音,并不是因為大家的答案【內容】不夠好,而是因為:大家的【發音】錯誤真的太多了!
shurui同學是亦鷗有名的淡定大神,不論什么內容,她都說得從容不迫。這一題的答案雖然:很空洞,但因為發音非常標準,整體的表達十分流利,第一遍聽依然覺得真的很棒!每一次在收聽大量晨讀團同學的錄音時,Pt都感到,有一件事不得不承認:發音好真的太重要!1)發音不標準的,根本聽不懂啊!2)發音有口音的,聽著很難受啊!3)發音特別好的,心里就覺得ta答得好啊!所以,強烈建議大家,正音,從今天開始!
這里就不得不再一次強調:我們要做的是【跟讀】。除了學內容之外,還要學答題者的發音,要去模仿,去跟著讀。請大家不要僅是查看推送的內容,然后就開始自己讀了——那你的發音錯誤永遠也改不了哇!一定要點擊閱讀原文,收聽高分回答,并收聽Pt在晨讀團里的語音示范,每天堅持再堅持,就一定能跟發音錯誤說88!
在此,說一下本題的幾個常見錯誤發音:
adult 這個音已經被大家念出花兒來了,Pt聽到最奇葩的發音是:“矮倒他”……這都什么鬼???請注意:這個音是/??d?lt/ 或者 /?'d?lt/ (注意,a這個原因發音不同的時候,重音也不一樣哦!shuirui讀的就是/??d?lt/ )不要跟我說你的“矮倒他”是英音!英音里的a也不會發成“矮”噠!
mature 這個音,也是各種不同版本,聽得Pt都快懷疑人生了。有人讀“嗎ture”有人讀“馬ture” 還有人連ture都不對,讀成了“嗎ter”。那真是。。。誰能聽出來你在說“成熟”啊!我還以為想說master然后吞了s呢!請注意:這個音是/m?'t???r/ 前面不是/ma/是/m?/ 哦!
vote 請大家注意哦!v在發音的時候,要用上牙輕輕咬一下下唇~不要出現漏風的效果!
接下來,Pt來解釋一下我的修改:
1. 【不能拿18 years old當“18歲的人”來講】I think +people who are already 18 years old are mature enough to vot
18歲的人,正確的說法如下:
A. 18-year-old people 【作定語,通常都是這樣,加了連字符,就成了形容詞啦!比如:在校的活動 on-campus activities】
B. people who are 18 【作表語】
C. people who are 18 years old 【作表語】
2. 【18歲,我們能夠對“我們的”行為負責 + behavior是不可數名詞】we can take responsibility for the our behaviors and actions
3.【一個發音錯誤】 I think young people above 18 are very concerned about the future of the country 這里的concerned,被shurui發成了concered,中間那個n被吞了!這是我們大家也經常犯的錯誤。建議再練習一下environment和government,也是要注意:不要吞n! (加入晨讀團,收聽Pt的語音示范~)
4. 【沒有細節】節選一下優秀錄音下方的網友點評(是的,亦鷗的網友們就是這么犀利!這才能進步呀!不痛不癢、你好我好大家好的點評,有啥用?!)
- 我覺得你沒給出充足理由解釋 為什么mature到可以vote。其他方面都ok。
shuirui的回應:
- 首先感謝你的點評.因為1)成年人了,可以為行為負責 2)具有獨立思考的能力 3)具有相關的知識 2+3)可以做出正確的判斷.
圍觀群眾表示:
- 語言考試不太關注內容,能夠順下來就很不錯了。如果內容要改進,最好有一個具體事例。
shuirui的回應:
- 我也覺得有具體例子更好,可是想半天沒想出來呀...
在此,Pt給出回應:
1. 語言考試并不是完全不看內容哦~ 但就像我在前面講到的:【語音確實加分!】不過,【內容也不容忽視!】
2. 增加細節和例子并不難,Pt已經示范啦~
A. details 是把你說的事情具體化,如: we can take responsibility for the our behaviors and actions.我們能對自己的行為負責,具體化后: At the age of 18, we begin to make decisions independently, and thus our votes can represent our own opinions.我們自己獨立做決策,因此我們的選票能夠代表自己的意見。
B. exemplification 是把你說的事情搞成一個具體的事件,如: young people above 18 are very concerned about the future of the country. 年輕人關心國家的未來。具體到一個例子:For example, my friends and I are just 18 years old, and we often surf online to learn about the information related to national policies. 我和我的小伙伴,我們就成天看新聞。
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